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Contrived Chapter Four...
Jun. 6th, 2007 | 03:49 pm
living: Kitchen bar stool
feeling: 
stuck
listening: The Black Pearl by Klaus Badelt
I'm having a bit of trouble right now getting chapter four of La Femme de Pirouette done. Every word I put down seems too... contrived, I guess I could say. So forced - it doesn't flow whatsoever. And I've had to scrap about three pages due to lack of well-written dialogue.
All I have at the moment is this small introduction paragraph. I had intended to wait a chapter or two more, develop a bit more plot, before I actually got to the scenes that would require even more detail (for which the story is rated R, M, Nc-17, whatever you wish to call it).
The Opera was busy during the day, a cacophony of gentle steps, loud scales sung in high, rich voices, which entwined themselves in between the candle light which cast small bouts of light over the sunlight that dared to sneak through the angel sculptures adorning large windows.
I definitely need to work some more on that... besides, I've been putting myself up for lots of pressure right now. After reading Certainty by Madeleine Thien (an amazing book), I've been(unknowingly, until someone pointed it out) writing more like her - or at least trying to.
Back to my ever faithful Microsoft Word.
Lily.
All I have at the moment is this small introduction paragraph. I had intended to wait a chapter or two more, develop a bit more plot, before I actually got to the scenes that would require even more detail (for which the story is rated R, M, Nc-17, whatever you wish to call it).
The Opera was busy during the day, a cacophony of gentle steps, loud scales sung in high, rich voices, which entwined themselves in between the candle light which cast small bouts of light over the sunlight that dared to sneak through the angel sculptures adorning large windows.
I definitely need to work some more on that... besides, I've been putting myself up for lots of pressure right now. After reading Certainty by Madeleine Thien (an amazing book), I've been(unknowingly, until someone pointed it out) writing more like her - or at least trying to.
Back to my ever faithful Microsoft Word.
Lily.
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La Femme de Pirouette: Chapitre Trois
May. 27th, 2007 | 05:56 pm
living: Faux Balenciega armchair
feeling: 
romantic
listening: Your Hands Are Cold by Jean-Yves Thibaudet
La Femme de Pirouette
Pairing: Erik/Mme Giry
Rating: R
Genre: Angst/Drama
Version: The Phantom of the Opera blockbuster movie (2004)
Length: Short story
Chapitre Trois: The hopes heat up with a cold visitor bringing his candlelit illumination to the room and to every desire she had locked away...
( La Femme de Pirouette: Chapitre Trois )
Pairing: Erik/Mme Giry
Rating: R
Genre: Angst/Drama
Version: The Phantom of the Opera blockbuster movie (2004)
Length: Short story
Chapitre Trois: The hopes heat up with a cold visitor bringing his candlelit illumination to the room and to every desire she had locked away...
( La Femme de Pirouette: Chapitre Trois )
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La Femme de Pirouette: Chapitre Deux
May. 27th, 2007 | 09:04 am
living: Kitchen bar stool
feeling: 
inspired
listening: The Notebook (Main Title) by Aaron Zigman
La Femme de Pirouette
Pairing: Erik/Mme Giry
Rating: R
Genre: Angst/Drama
Version: The Phantom of the Opera blockbuster movie (2004)
Length: Short story
Chapitre Deux: The mysterious, eluding presence of the Phantom is troubling Mme Giry to no end.
( La Femme de Pirouette: Chapitre Deux )
Pairing: Erik/Mme Giry
Rating: R
Genre: Angst/Drama
Version: The Phantom of the Opera blockbuster movie (2004)
Length: Short story
Chapitre Deux: The mysterious, eluding presence of the Phantom is troubling Mme Giry to no end.
( La Femme de Pirouette: Chapitre Deux )
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La Femme de Pirouette
May. 26th, 2007 | 07:50 pm
living: Muskoka chair
feeling: dreaming
listening: Notes/Twisted Every Way by Andrew Lloyd Webber
La Femme de Pirouette
Pairing: Erik/Mme Giry
Rating: R
Genre: Angst/Drama
Version: The Phantom of the Opera blockbuster movie (2004)
Length: Short story
With Christine and Raoul gone from the Paris Opera House, the ballerinas are left to entertain their audience, trying to find a new lead singer. Mme Giry and her daughter, Meg, are left entwined in the mystery that is the Phantom - the former with a wistful reminiscence and the latter with an ignorant innocence. Will the Phantom reconcile with his liberator?
( La Femme de Pirouette )
Pairing: Erik/Mme Giry
Rating: R
Genre: Angst/Drama
Version: The Phantom of the Opera blockbuster movie (2004)
Length: Short story
With Christine and Raoul gone from the Paris Opera House, the ballerinas are left to entertain their audience, trying to find a new lead singer. Mme Giry and her daughter, Meg, are left entwined in the mystery that is the Phantom - the former with a wistful reminiscence and the latter with an ignorant innocence. Will the Phantom reconcile with his liberator?
( La Femme de Pirouette )
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Welcome to the Greatest Show on Earth
May. 26th, 2007 | 07:36 pm
living: Piano Bench
feeling: 
complacent
listening: Prelude in E Minor by Frédéric Chopin
Welcome to the fan fiction stylings of Lily Riddle, or as you may know me, ReboundWriter. This is a haven for my comments and stories for the Phantom of the Opera, as well as a bit of insight into my own life.
Feel free to browse.
Lily.
Feel free to browse.
Lily.
